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    Reading Master

    http://www.readingmaster.info/

    Selling an e-book and a piece of sight reading software.

    I'm going to see if I can make money promoting it on adwords.

    I'm in a 50/50 profit split with the author of the book and software.

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    looks like a potential profit maker - speeds reading courses can command a good premium-however you need to check the text - several typos / bad grammar that might put 'slow' readers off.

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    Could you please point them out? Most of it wasn't written by me.

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    Para 2 a not are
    Para 4 tend to wander
    Last para 1st sentence just stops
    These immediately jumped out at me

    Hope that helps

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    Corrected them. Thank you

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    Nice design, not sure on how the program works though.
    Don't you just love free internet games ?

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    Actually, I'm not sure about the design. I have perfect eyesite (as far as I am aware) but found my eyes were straining as I got towards the bottom of the page. You really need a bigger text size in my opinion. Is the site aimed at parents? Older people have worse eye site.

    The tahoma font seems cramped. It's a microsoft font and therefore I'm not even sure if mac users will have it? Maybe specify alternatives ... verdana, arial etc.

    You could also try increasing the line spacing... line-height:1.5em; or something. Along with a bigger font size, that should space it out nicely and have it looking much better.

    I really think you should be using something other than paypal. I think you'll lose a lot of sales using paypal compared to 2checkout for example. 20 or whatever the setup fee is isn't a lot to lose, even if it doesn't work out.

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