Help Me Optomize My Homepage...

I think I'm trying to target too many keywords in my text on the home page:

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Games2Go offers over 100 free online games and cartoons for you to enjoy - Including all the online games from miniclip, kewlbox. We also have the best online game classics such as Pacman, Space Invaders and Love Meter. If you are looking for the best free web games you have come to the right place, as we have adventure, arcade, casino, puzzles, shows & sports internet games that don't even require a download! As all of our webgames are hosted on our site you won't find any dead links or nasty adverts that other sites will fill your browser with.

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So will someone offer me suggestions to how I should change it, and if you feel like it, re-write it for me...

Looks fine to me.. Yes you have alot but thats not necessarily bad.

Space out games2go so it is like games 2 go...

But for all the terms in not even in the first 10,000 results...

Welcome to the mother ****er that is Google.

Well Chris can always get in the top 10 within a month... I can't get how... I followed all his guides...

I doubt anyone can get in the top ten this month, if they try to optimize their site.

You got in the top ten for best web templates within a month of starting...

I mean with the current situation with google. Yeah it's easy normally, but now you may as well forget it.

Google might get back to normal...

I agree with incka. Same thing happened in the summer -- webmaster freaked out when google was messing with stuff. Eventually Google did come to their senses.

Although I'm now starting to doubt myself -- maybe Google's making some major permanent chances due to the upcoming IPO. Only time will tell. Hang in there